Baby Maker

I'm "The Baby Maker". I give women what they want, no questions asked. And I get paid to do it.  

It's the easiest job in the world. No fuss, no mess, and I make a ton of money.  

It was perfect. Then my next client walked in, and everything went to hell.  

Elisha was the last person I expected to see. The girl that got away. Curves that could make a model jealous, and come-hither eyes that turn my muscles to mush.  

Her husband treats her like dirt. I'll treat her like the queen she is.  

I screwed up once, but this time I'll do everything right.  

No games. No regrets. I'm taking Elisha back. And this time, I'm not letting her go.

©2018 Mia Ford (P)2019 Tantor

Unlikable main characters

This story by far had so many WFT moments. The main characters were which I hate to use this word, dumb. I had to use this word bc both made the same mistakes over and over and over. Their inner and external dialogue kept my eyes rolled almost the entire story, especially toward the end. I kept listening thinking it will get better it didn’t. At times, I felt like the h should die since she continuously put herself in danger. I almost gave up so many times but I’m not a quitter so I finish this. It was exhausted to listen for romance genre.

Week

The guy is a woes the girl is pathetic. No one in this story tries to protect themselves or fight for what they want.