Demon Mage: Book 3

After defeating the formidable Vampire Beast and obtaining the vial of vampire blood, Brian's attention now turns to other matters, particularly the newfound love he shares with Lilith, the enchanting Succubus. However, Brian's romantic entanglements don't end there. Seenia, the captivating Elf, and Inonia, the alluring Vampire, have also captured his heart.

But there is one more individual who holds a special place in Brian's world—Galdot, the Dragon girl trapped within the ring by her own father, the Last Dragon. Brian yearns to set her free and introduce her to the wonders of this realm, a world so different from her own.

Emboldened by his newfound wealth and growing experience, Brian decides it's time for a well-deserved summer vacation. However, an unforeseen obstacle arises—the magical world itself seems unwilling to let him take a break. With the assistance of his loyal Kobolds, Brian becomes determined to tackle the problems that elude the magical community. He recognizes that their rigidity and lack of power hinder their ability to address certain challenges. Brian, on the other hand, sees an opportunity to make a difference while also turning a profit.

Join Brian and his extraordinary companions as they embark on a thrilling adventure through the magical realm. Together, they navigate treacherous paths, unravel mysteries, and confront those who seek to disrupt the delicate balance of magical law. As Brian delves deeper into this captivating world, he discovers the true extent of his powers and the profound impact he can make.

Prepare to be enthralled as Brian and his extraordinary entourage face off against malevolent forces, driven by their unwavering determination to preserve justice and protect the magical realm they call home.

©2024 D. Levesque (P)2024 Royal Guard Publishing LLC

characters laugh too much

love the story but characters laughing as interjection is weird and sounds robotic
also Brian consistently forget hid powers or his allies powers is annoying

what a mess

the story is great, unfortunately the author or editor didn't give a crap about double checking their work. there are so many repeated conversations. for example the MC confesses that he's part angel but he already did that when he first met the female dragon in the ring. so this whole second conversation was just ridiculous. same thing when she meets the kobalds and acts like it's the first time knowing they still exist. he already told her inside the ring. it's not just in this book but the whole series. and here is her telling him the angels magic when her father said he doesn't know their powers. her father told him the story of the dragons and angels including their numbers but here he acts like he didn't know there where 50,000 dragons vs 1,000,000 angels. the writing is a mess which is a shame because the overall story is great.

Good series

I like the series but I hate the fact that the mc keeps repeating stuff they covered in earlier chapters

Was only okay

This is the third book in the series and not quite as great as the first one was. Still interesting but story has begun to wander

inconsistent story elements

this feels ai written with all the plot points restated to characters who forgot they already knew information stated previously.