EMP:The Fall

A Post Apocalyptic Survival Story

Ridiculed by his peers and family, Garret Witmer fights to prove his theory to be true. Armed with a military background and skills to survive in the post-apocalyptic world, Garrett has no idea that what he’s about to face will be much more devastating than he anticipated. As tensions rise among people, disaster is not only imminent but inevitable. Will Garrett be able to convince his friends and family to trust his instincts and follow his lead before lives are lost? Can he keep his doubting family safe from harm? Find out in this action-packed post-apocalyptic thrill ride!

Good story

 If you’re going to use a virtual voice program, you may need to write a script just for that for instance, instead of saying EMP you may need to say E M P also if you’re going to use a gun caliber of 45 do not put a period in front of it cause it will say .45

stilted speaking. no inflection or emotion.

story wasn't bad. But the voice not being part of the story with nuances and warmth it detracted from the overall tale.

Moved at a nice pace.

Not very realistic, but not a bad story. This was way too short, should have continued with several more chapters.

Surprisingly good

I haven’t been a fan of the Virtual Voice narration in the last few months, but it seems to be getting better. This one doesn’t sound as robotic as the ones I listened to a few months ago.
Story is fairly good, Look forward to the next one, which I hope is in the correct order, I can’t tell yet. I enjoy listening while I bake and cook (and count while I crochet lol)

Story line holes

The story has holes and jumps, where it seems things are supposed to be mentioned but then they aren’t. Also the characters decisions do not always align with their portrayal or reality of typical people behave, and so the actions mismatch, and ultimately it ends up with a book that needs significant editing. The storyline has a strong foundation if the writing can be cleaned up.