Ghost Vampire

A mortal man who became a ghost vampire (Dylan) dies trying to get home to save his wife and daughter from his boss, who turns out to be a vampire. The corporation is just a front for the vampire world and when his boss kills his wife, she is just turned and becomes a vampire herself.

Later, as Dylan is trying to bring down the corporation, Diana fights back at the idea of being a vampire and realizes that the leader of the vampires is the one that killed her daughter. She and Dylan team up to bring the corporation to its knees.

©2019 J.P.Clark (P)2019 J.P.Clark

The story has potential.

I think that the basic premise for the story is great. It seems this may be the beginning of what might be a longer series of stories for Dylan and Diana? I would probably continue on with the story if there were more. The narrator spoke clearly and did a good job. If I would offer any suggestion, it would be to turn up the narrators microphone and turn down the background sounds. Some parts were a little hard to understand.

Good story, bad music & special effects.

The story was compelling. However, the storm special effect & music were distracting. I am ready to hear the rest of the book.