Moonbeam & Roses

Sara secretly had a crush on Wes and had most of her life. Then when Wes rejects her love and moves to Montana, she jumps into her work as an artist and into the arms of another man. It is not until a tragic accident happens that things start to turn around for Sara. Could she finally have true love with the cowboy in her dreams or will her blindness cause her to throw it all away?

©2012 Stephanie Hurt (P)2013 Stephanie Hurt

Needs Work

I was not impressed with the writing. It felt juvenile. The flow needed to be better. The characters were flat.
The narrator had no emotion. The words were voiced with no energy. The performance was slow and drab. I was hoping the story would improve but it did not. I was bored with it.