Waiting for Redemption

A Phil Byrnes Mystery

Philomena ‘Phil’ Byrnes and her husband Peter ran the Byrnes Private Investigation company in Seattle, Washington; until Peter was murdered at his desk late one night. While keeping the company alive, Phil has been slowly gathering information to try and figure out who killed him.

One night she, her business associate Buzzy and their close friend Seattle Police Detective Coleman, go up to Phil's cabin in the San Juan Islands to comb through the information and finally bring the killer to justice.

©2008 Sable Jak (P)2008 Sable Jak

I love theater, but...

The basics are here, but the volume of all the players must be within a better, narrower range of quiet to loud; as it is, one is so loud you have to turn it down, and the next is so quiet, you have to turn it up.
This volume problem also varies by character, which makes it worse. One character is always too loud and another is always too quiet; this distorts the relationships of the characters. I hope you keep trying, and just fix these fundamentals.