A Foreman for Fiona

Mail Order Papa

By: Barbara Goss

Narrated by: Jeff Moon

"Trust dies but mistrust blossoms."

After burying her father, Fiona Chalfant is left with a choice: keep the run-down ranch or sell it and move on. With nowhere else to go, she hires Lance Dalton to be her foreman; he has a young son, and needs the work. Working together to rejuvenate the property, they are unaware one of the workers hired could be a dangerous man.

Things go smoothly and Lance and Fiona begin to fall in love. Life seems perfect until the child mysteriously disappears, then Fiona. Who is out to hurt them and why?

©2023 Barbara Goss (P)2023 Barbara Goss

Good story line

I would like to see more development of the story line very good basic short story.

Sweet Love Story

This book about Lance and Fiona is not only a sweet love story, but laced with adventure. Lance has answered the ad Fiona put in the papers for a foreman for her farm. Everything was working out not only on the farm but with the growing relationship between the two. Lance's little boy was settling in and Fiona fell in love with him quickly. But Lance did not realize they had hired a man who was trying to take the farm from Fiona. God works in wonderful ways as the story progresses. This is a very enjoyable book. Sweet and clean.

The narrator is good and brings the characters to life.

I received this audiobook from the author and am voluntarily leaving my honest review.

Great book

I listened to this one on audio. The narrator did a great job in bringing this book to life. Barbara Goss brings you a great book with suspense, romance, and the unexpected. The characters are well-written and well-thought-out. Listen or read, you won't regret it.

Very nice

This was a nice clean western romance that had wonderful character growth throughout the story. Sometimes I struggled to differentiate between the characters because the narrator’s voice didn’t change much, but the pacing and pronunciation was great.

Fantastic!

Barbara writes the sweetest clean stories. This one had adventure and compassion galore.
Jeff did a great job narrating it. I loved his voices for the characters.