Alphas Axel

HEROES, Book 1

By: Pandora Snow

Narrated by: Christopher James Neal, Melissa Barr

Tantalizing, tender tatas tease my cheek. My hardening manhood is begging to be unleashed. Amythest is inflaming my raging appetite for a woman. But rules are rules. No touching.

Imagine the utter shock that courses through my stimulated body when this goddess saunters into my conference room a few days later.

My cocksure attitude spectacularly backfires in my enamored face as she rebuffs my advances.

Watching her curvaceous, abundant ass stomp to the elevator further stokes my cravings.

Letting her alone now isn’t an option. But she must explain why she strips. Is it wrong to ask her if she gets paid for sex?

Apparently so, the slamming door and my stupid unfiltered mouth forcing her to retreat.

When I heroically save the day, a powerful man accosting her in the park, she agrees to a rendezvous.

Then, panic stops my captivated heart as blocked appears in big, red letters on my cell phone hours before our date.

What the hell? Addison’s in unthinkable trouble. I feel her cry of desperation in my bones. No measure is too drastic to protect my precious woman. I pray to God I reach her in time. I love her. Exactly as she is.

©2020, 2021 Janet Marie Luzius (P)2021 Janet Marie Luzius

DNF

Just plain awkward start and narration. Could not get into it to even get through the first chapter.

Navy Alpha meets his hidden gem.

First let me tell you there are some editing issues that should be resolved ASAP. The dual POV is confused by improper placement of POVs. it is really strange and hard to follow if you are not paying attention.

The Author Pandora Snow is new to me. I am a sucker for military romances and liked the semi unique angle of this one. As well the Naval component (GO Navy!!!)


While this is not the best listen ever it was entertaining. Melissa (Moran) Barr is one of my favorite female narrators. Christopher James Neal was new to my ears. I definitely enjoyed him. (I would have enjoyed more had the Author not felt it necessary for the Captain to constantly talk about his need to be dominant.)

All in all an enjoyable listen. I do hope someone re-edits and that the next book is more enjoyable.

Worth a credit? Not sure. I was lucky enough to pick up during a sale.