Armageddon

Dale Brown's Dreamland, Book 6

By: Dale Brown, Jim DeFelice

Narrated by: Christopher Lane

One of the Air Force's top guns, Captain Breanna Stockard is training Brunei pilots to fly the EB-52 Megafortress. But when a violent attempted kidnapping threatens a major arms deal about to take place, Breanna and her husband, Major Jeff "Zen" Stockard, must uncover a plot that - in this volatile region of the world - could mean Armageddon.

©2013 Dale Bronw and Jim Defelice (P)2013 Brilliance Audio, Inc.

Good story but some irritating mistakes on military nomenclature and culture

Overall entertaining with good plot and subplots. Some 'amateur' mistakes: 1) As a general rule an Air Force special operations unit never ever would lead a US Marine or US Army unit in direct combat, 2) there is no such thing as a "clip"; ammunition is loaded into a rifle or pistol magazine. Guns are those big ones on a naval vessel or airship, 3) there is simply no way an LTC in the USAF or 0-5 in any branch, would not know to take an M4 carbine off safe before firing it.

great storyline!!!!!

awesome story line. I listen to them all! dale brown at his best as 1

One crisis after another! When will it end?!

The cast of characters face yet another daunting mission laid before them, struggling to catch up to the evil foes that surround them, and in some cases, have been watching their every move. The heartache and struggle and the shear amount of courage these characters face will test their limits and endurance of courage. The team faces yet another crisis not knowing who is their friend or their enemy until the end. Great story! Dale Brown and Jim DeFelice have done it again!

Another great dreamland addition

As always a great storyline that wraps up the mission yet leaves you wanting the next book. Another great addition to the series

Disappointing U.S. Air Force manual on high tech

What could have made this a 4 or 5-star listening experience for you?

Less high tech language on air craft and weapons and more on people involved in the story.
you had the feeling that you were listening to an Air Force Manual on aircraft. (BORING)

What could Dale Brown and Jim DeFelice have done to make this a more enjoyable book for you?

Improve the story line . STOP trying to fill the pages of your short story to make it into a novel with all this HIGH TECH [for want of a better word] blabber, that most of your readers don't understand. Surely, you can do better?

Would you listen to another book narrated by Christopher Lane?

Lane is first class...Super

If you could play editor, what scene or scenes would you have cut from Armageddon?

SEE ABOVE^^

Any additional comments?

I listened to your book because I purchased it but was very disappointed with it.