Caught In Crime, Captured By Love

An Urban Love Story

By: K. Blaze

Narrated by: Virtual Voice

Riley James was just elected the CEO of Petro Incorporation. Things seem to be going good in her life. She has who she thinks is the perfect fiancé. Life has a way of showing you differently; especially for Riley. Davin Sumpter is a jealous man on a mission after Riley’s father grants her the position that he thought was meant for him. With Riley’s best friend Larissa being on his back about taking care of her, he does what he as to do to make things happen.​ Davin calls upon someone that he hung with back in the day. Mecca Anderson was hired and paid fifty G’s up front to kidnap the beautiful and sexy and Riley. Things become complicated when a secret is revealed that could ruin everything. Amongst all the lies and drama somewhere along the lines Mecca falls for the beauty. He’s faced with a tough decision on whether to let her go or stick to the plan as he was paid to do. Will the love that has blossomed between the two make Mecca have a change of heart and let her go or will he continue to hold her captive and be caught in crime?

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I don't like the fact of the kidnapping.The second time it should've been a kidnapping

When I say a STRETCH I mean 👀 jus wow

I was trying to be kind while listening because I understand that a lot of our African-American authors don’t believe in story development. It just frustrates me that she finds out that her best friend is sleeping with her man, but it never occurs to her that the friend could also be a part of the kidnapping? Howwww sway. Just stretching the secrets cuz we ran out of them too soon I guess.

Hmmm… issues early on..

Ok author and everyone….
How is someone, especially a wealthy heiress/ businesswoman, kidnapped but NO demands are made?????

IF he doesn’t intend to kill her… why would Mecca let her see his face?????

Also… why would there NOT be a camera on the outside of the warehouse… and why would an experienced criminal just open a secure door????


Since the police are aware of the kidnapping… why aren’t the parents phone lines tapped???Since evil chick knows there is a connection with Devin, Riley, and Mecca… and she went to the warehouse… why hasn’t she gone back?

Ok…back to the story….

Ehh

It gave rushed a lot of typo errors it was just ok I’m kinda disappointed no shade but it was wat it was