Christmas Eve with the Mountain Man

By: Lilah Hart

Narrated by: Virtual Voice

She's always played by the rules. But Christmas Eve with a hot mountain man might just have her breaking them.

Christmas Eve is pretty uneventful...until he shows up.

He's the most handsome man I've ever seen, and he's sitting at my counter. Just as I'm looking for ways to keep him around a little longer, life hands us a twist in the form of a disaster.

Next thing I know, I'm running an errand with that hunky mountain man. But nobody's going to approve of me getting involved with this older guy, right?

Christmas Eve with the Mountain Man is an OTT age gap holiday romance featuring an alpha hero and V-card heroine. It’s designed to be read in only one hour. If you like short, steamy instalove novellas, you’ll love the entire Rosewood Ridge Christmas series!

language

It’s all in the language. Which words are used together are important in conveying a story.
What was Max’s age? First he says he’s so much older than Shelby, then he’s 7 years away from 40, which would be 33. First she’s 25, then 23.
Hart was also a little confusing about Max’s siblings and their respective partners.
It was unclear what was going on with Pete and his wife. You can kill someone with a car. The charges should not have been dropped.
Virtual Voice was a bit flat for narration. Pacing, emotion and character differentiation need work.

Max and Shelby

Another fantastic addition to an already amazing series. Christmas Eve with the Mountain Man is sexy, sensual and charming. I enjoyed going on this fast paced & passionate journey with Max and Shelby. Fun story.