Cinch Mountain

By: Jared McVay

Narrated by: Virtual Voice

CLAY BRENTWOOD RANCHER TURNED GUNMAN ON THE VENGEANCE TRAIL! ENZO BABINEAUX WAS PURE EVIL. His mouth salivated as he watched the healthy looking young woman with the fiery red hair putting gold nuggets into a leather pouch. She had no hat on and her red hair glistened in the sunshine. He would take his time with this one, he thought to himself. He would make her scream and beg for him to let her die. He enjoyed it best when they begged. Enzo didn’t know it, but the only problem with his plan was that, although you would never know it from looking, the girl knew she was being watched. It was the big Morgan she rode that had raised his head from where he stood eating grass, letting her know that someone or something was nearby. “Well”, she thought to herself, “if he wants to try something stupid...”

The “uhs “ in the story. What for?

Words were clear and easy to understand but the errors in reading were distracting. &&&&&&&&&@@ no more words for me

mispronounced words.

I do not like the virtual voice, bring back the humans. The pause everytime there was an a was ridiculous.

Virtual Voice 👎🏻

Story was good the Virtual Voice was horrible did not flow smoothly and many mis pronunciations