Crawl Space

A Short Horror Story

By: Dona Fox

Narrated by: Caroline Downs

Claustrophobic, disturbing, and creepy. A lost girl is kidnapped and held for years by a dangerous man. Her doll takes the brunt of his abuse in place of the girl. Then the man is killed in a bloody and brutal attack. Now she must protect her own child from the jealous, intrusive, and sometimes vicious toy. Who will survive when they enter the crawl space under the house?

Quiet horror that punches all the buttons.

©2018 Dona Fox (P)2018 Dona Fox

Creepy Doll!

I think the narrator did a good job, but perhaps wasn't the best fit. I think her voice seemed almost too scratchy sounding, in my opinion. Since it's such a short story, we (understandably) aren't given a whole lot of information as to whose point of view we are experiencing this horror from. Some narrators have a younger/older sound; and I think if the age was shown in the narrator's voice better, it would have made this short horror come more to life.

This short story is super creepy! I used to have dolls when I was younger but these kind of horror stories makes me glad I dont have them anymore. Sort of reminded me of Annabelle.

It may be short, but the writing is descriptive and twisted; it's well written and leaves plenty for the listener's imagination. If you're a scaredy cat like myself, but still want a little taste of horror, then this little tidbit is more than enough to satisfy that craving.

I received a review copy at my request and have voluntarily left this unbiased review.

Brilliantly Creepy

This is my first audiobook by Dona Fox and I am now hooked. The collaboration between author and narrator produced a real symphony from written word to spoken. I look forward to more from Ms Fox, as well as more from Caroline Downs. She made the listening experience perfect.

Dolls and whispering…

The story was great. The narrator’s almost whispering voice irked me. That’s all preference though, the story was awesome.

Creepy

This entertaining short story has a creepiness factor of 10. The narrator does an excellent job adding to the eerie atmosphere.

Huh?

I've listened to this story twice now and still couldn't tell you what it's about, maybe a doll, maybe a child, maybe a mommy, maybe just a crazy lady. No idea 🤷