Detention Dungeon: The Bell Rings No More

A LitRPG Dungeon Core Adventure Where Survival Is the First Lesson

By: Kevin Walker

Narrated by: Louise Rose, Freddie Cashbolt

The Detention Dungeon
A Dungeon Core LitRPG with teeth, trauma, and twisted revenge

Chloe was supposed to turn nineteen in a month. Instead, she’s murdered by a school bus of all things. High school chewed her up and spit her out, every day attacked and bullied by an evil group of girls, the last thing she remembers is their laughter. Rejected by the goddess of heroes for being too broken; too angry, too alone, too real, Chloe’s soul would be left to rot in the void.

But the system has other plans.

Reborn as a dungeon core, Chloe is given one last chance: build, grow, and survive. With the help of her reluctant (and suspiciously smug) dungeon attendant, a goblin named Bookbite, Chloe begins shaping her pain into something sharp. Something terrifying.

Forget math class. Now there are traps in the lockers, monsters in the halls, and rules that bend to her will. Adventurers beware: Chloe has had enough. And in this dungeon, every hallway is haunted by the ghosts of high school hell.

Justice isn’t coming.
She is the detention.

©2025 Kevin Walker (P)2026 Kevin Walker

The story of the forever victim who never stood up

This is by far the most boo hoo I have listened to in a story. The MC has everything wrong happen, and never once got tired of being a punching bag, never stood up for themselves. They died pathetic, they constantly complain about how bad their life is even after they are dead. The entire dungeon is just the MC's trauma given form and everything reminds them of all the awful stuff that happened so you get constant flashbacks that no longer matter since they DIED. It's one long "woe is me, the world is so cruel" story that never ends.

I was hoping she would grow be more confident and instead got a 30 min chapter of how she felt so small in Kindergarten and had gum pressed into her hair. This is no longer relevant, the MC is dead, they are a dungeon now. MOVE ON TO DUNGEON STUFF. I am sick of hearing about her seemingly endless traumas. Each chapter is a new trauma, each chapter is more internal dialog of how she feels so helpless, small and useless.