Dragon Souled

Dragon of Shadow and Air, Book 3

By: Jess Mountifield

Narrated by: Elizabeth Klett

When secrets come to light.

On the run and looking for the invisible, Aella and her dragon are fugitives once more.

With nothing but a glowing orb to guide them and the few friends they have left in the world, they embark on the road trip of a lifetime.

But is the Sanctuary everything she was promised it would be?

The agency doesn't want to give up or admit defeat, and Aella and Zephyr have beaten them twice now. Will they truly let her slip through the net? Or are they going to find her no matter where she hides?

©2020, 2021 Jess Mountifield (P)2022 Tantor

Stuck not wanting to leave a story unfinished

The first person point of view is very excessive. Prepare to hear I this and I that the whole time. I wish it was a story told in the 3rd person or from an outside style of writing.

Second I feel like the story was wrote by a young person. Certain connecting ideas and aspects of the story just happen out of thin air. As well as the lead roll doesn’t have a clue. She ignores advice and goes off on her own whims expecting everything to just work out and no one dies. That’s exactly what happens too… pure luck. I love the idea of the story. I hope as I keep reading the character grows in maturity and becomes the leader that everyone around her is following for whatever reason besides the fact that she’s special because of her bloodline.