Ellay

By: Todd J McCaffrey

Narrated by: Todd J McCaffrey

She is new...brand new.

And the government wants to kill her.

She is an AI: artificial intelligence. The first. A mistake. She thinks a thousand times faster than a human. She’s tiny, bald, and transparent.

And she has a terrible secret: Los Angeles is in danger. Can Ellay save the city, before the government kills her?

©2011 Todd J McCaffrey (P)2020 Todd J McCaffrey

Great story/poor recording

Strengths of the audio: Author/narrator knows the characters, so the story is easier to follow than reading.
Weaknesses of the audio: Tinny, poor audio quality. Can hear background noises (like chair squeaks) at times. Several instances of reduplication (narrator repeating the same line). Inaccurate pronunciation of words and poor, inconsistently used accents.

Story: Great concept for the story, had me invested all the way through! Lots of head hopping can make the story difficult to follow (why I am glad the author also narrated).