Every Mistake a Forfeit

By: J. S. Candela

Narrated by: Nate Raven

In Dickensian Britain, a popular parlour game called for players to sacrifice something of value each time they made an error, no matter how insignificant. Barely escaping from an oppressive school for wayward boys, teenagers Ben and Jem find themselves free and able to express themselves for the first time in their lives. As their bond and affection for each other deepens, their journey takes them to a dark and horrific place where their devotion to each other is tested to the very limit. A haunting tale of queer discovery, love, and sacrifice.

©2025 Jon S Candela (P)2026 Jon S Candela

Every Mistake a Forfeit

This book is wonderfully written, and Nate Raven brings it to life with his wonderful voice. From the very start you are drawn in to a time I can only imagine, and J.S. does a wonderful job of re-creating a time that was even less compassionate to the less fortunate.

The many turns in this book had me sad, angry, and smiling over again, and kept me wanting more, and still wanting to know what happens next.

The book takes us on a trek through old England, which had me following along with Google Maps.

I hope to see more collaborations from this Authour and Narrator. Bravo to you both.