Labyrinth Hunter - Book II

SUBMERGED

By: DPS HEALER

Narrated by: Virtual Voice

After parting ways with his old party on a bad note, Regulus assumes the identity of Fletcher, a bow and arrow crafter that doesn’t speak and is covered in bandages. People avoided him thinking that he was suspicious or might have some sort of curse, but he makes a name for himself and improves his skills before taking the next step in his journey.

Before he could decide what would that step be, though, Regulus receives a good offer from one of his clientes, the chance to explore one labyrinth by himself, sell his products for a better price and even some rare enchantments... the cost is to help the empire that he hates so much for a few days against the Aquarians that are destroying their coast.

The world began to change at an insane pace and whether Regulus liked or not, he would end up being caught in the chaos, but he never imagined that his next journey would take him so deep....

big improvement. less usage of still

with a few edit and actual voice actor like jeff hays or travis baldree, this could be amazing.

decent story telling, bad virtual voice

the pronouncation is the worst, followed by the dialog. no difference in voice between characters, and lastly the stats review crawl with the misreading of numbers. the plot is predicable. the unlimited skill system is over powered. the character Sluggo would frown upon this febble human attempt with disdain.

The Story is good

The storyline is interesting. The writing is bad. Could be a non-native English speaker? Repeated words in the same sentence and use of “still”. The random science lessons of googled information are annoying and a little hilarious. I’m not sure why the internal thoughts of the MC suddenly become a Wikipedia page but it’s jarring and completely pointless. Glad this title is free otherwise I’d be less than pleased. And “delacerated” isn’t a word.