Mafia Kingpin's Boy

An M/M Bad Boy Instalove Novella

By: Dillon Hunter

Narrated by: Virtual Voice

One night. One wrong move. That's all it took to change everything.

I knew better than to try and make a move on his turf, in his town.

Maybe I was stupid. Maybe I was feeling reckless. Maybe I just wanted to feel something--anything at all--that night.

Or maybe I wanted to push him, just to see how far he would go.

Now I'm in too deep and I have to make a choice that will change my life forever. Out here on the streets, there are winners and losers. I've been on the losing side for way too long.

It's time I started winning. But is the price too high?

Mafia Kingpin's Boy is a high heat novella that features a tough mafia king, a mouthy upstart with a chip on his shoulder, and enough spice to make you sweat!

Good Bones, Needs a Real Narrator

I think this story has the potential to be great. I felt it was held back by the virtual narration, which made it hard to feel the emotions and intensity between the characters. The inflection is off, making it awkward at a time. The story itself has good ideas, and a few bits were really good, but I think the author should flesh out Enzo and Rocco's relationship more before they are intimate, spend some time doing more world building, and solidifying back stories. It would be longer, but much more clear. I hope this author keeps writing and improving. 😊

Jimmy and Rocco…

First let me say I think virtual voice is weird…mostly because when the story describes a voice as being low or growly or raspy, the tenor should be lower. A live narrator may be able to adjust to make the voice complement the story. Outside of that virtual voice is fairly decent.

I thought the story was okay, but because it was so short, I felt like I missed some of the elements needed to see how Jimmy and Rocco’s relationship ship had developed to what it was.

Dirty talk was a bit much for me, but story itself not terrible.

It was free...you get what you pay for

The author literally combined every stereotype from every mobster movie they have ever watched. The story is completely unimaginative, cliche filled, and lacks any nuance or depth. There is no way the reviews aren't from family and friends.