My Mafia Kingpin, My Stalker

A Mafia Omegaverse Fated Mates with Knotting and Milking

By: Sadie Smith

Narrated by: Virtual Voice

Elena
I feel his presence before I see him. A shadow lingering in the periphery of my life, watching, waiting. I tell myself it's paranoia. That the powerful man who stands across the street every night, his gaze burning through the glass, isn’t really here for me.
But I know better.
Dominic Valenti doesn’t watch without reason. And when he finally steps out of the shadows and into my life, I realize too late that I was never meant to escape him.
He doesn’t just want to own me. He wants to break me.
And the most terrifying part?
I think I want it too.
Dominic
She runs a failing bookstore. She lives a quiet, predictable life. She thinks she’s untouchable in her little sanctuary.
She has no idea she belongs to me.
For years, I’ve controlled her world from the shadows. Made sure no other man so much as looked at her. But now? Now she’s in heat, and I can’t stay away any longer.
I was patient. Calculated. But my time is up.
Elena is mine.
And I’ll ruin her completely before I let anyone else have her.

😈Bad boy, good girl
🔥 Slow burn obsession
😈 Dark and dangerous Alpha
🔥 Dangerous love
😈 Possessive, jealous alpha
🔥 Stalker romance
😈 Dark, twisted, and irresistible
🔥 High heat, no mercy
😈 Satisfying HEA, No cheating

Meh....

I'm not a huge fan of the Omegaverse, and this one is kind of an example why. Getting punished because someone came into your business and talked to you, no matter how erotic, is not so great. Kinda threw off the mood. Also, the whole 'she doesn't know anything about what's happening to her until too late' is a bit strange. How can it be that no Omega is taught about their unique biology? Also, the fated mates bit doesn't seem to apply, because there's not really any indication she knows about that. Not only does she have no clue, but he never even mentions it to her. That makes zero sense, just like her accepting things at the end. It doesn't feel like it's an actual part of the story - she didn't even like him 2 minutes before he started with his grand gesture. It's unnatural and contradicts the entire storyline as it existed until that one moment.
Now, the story itself isn't badly written, but the AI voice just... isn't great. The story idea is fun, and starts out pretty tense - staying that way during most of the book, even when there are intimate scenes. It's quite interesting, flows beautifully, and there's a decent amount of dialogue.