On the Road to Ramsgate

By: Melanie Schertz, a Lady

Narrated by: Virtual Voice

A Pride and Prejudice variation. The worlds of Fitzwilliam Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet literally collide. During a violent storm, Darcy races to recover his sister from George Wickham. At the same time, Elizabeth and her father are traveling to holiday in Ramsgate with the Gardiner family. When the two carriages collide, their lives will be altered forever.

Needs editing

First - virtual voice was better technically than usual as there was not the horrible glitch between chapters, but still monotone and lack of appropriate emotion. Now for the writing, there were glaring discrepancies that should not have been there and an editor should have caught and corrected them. For instance, a man kills two women and then hours later refuses to kill another woman because he says he does not kill women and children. Yeah, right. This may have been an early work of the author because the writing is immature and some of her other books are better.