Take My EX, I'll Take Your Daddy

By: Anastasia Slash, Bella Curvy

Narrated by: Virtual Voice

I knew I shouldn't have any feelings for him, but the situation was too wild to ignore. When I received a wedding invitation, I was shocked to see that my ex was getting married. While I should have been upset, a part of me was tempted to attend the wedding.

My friends encouraged me to enjoy myself, meet someone new, and lose my virginity. I had an incredible evening with a billionaire, and I couldn't stop smiling.

However, there was a major issue. The billionaire wanted an heir, and it turns out he is my ex's future father-in-law!

Story doesn't make sense- inconsistency

Story doesn't make sense as the mfc says she does one thing and then a chapter later it's like that never happened. Several times this happened before I quit listening with about an hour left.

I was a good concept for a story but was not executed well

Needs proof reading and major editing. Some characters names change. There are multiple scenes that are repeated. Punctuation and grammer need attention. What little plot and character depth there is is difficult to follow.

jealousy and greed

overall I like the plot but hate the virtual voice. it don't seems authentic too me but I like the story there should be an part 2 I would like it.

Lovely

i loved the story. the Grammer wasn't great and towards the last chapter or two there were repeated sentences.

Must have been a very early book

the girl is immature and I can't figure out what was so wonderful about her. the book is 80% sex; having, thinking about, and being asked about sex. I was extremely disappointed. this has to be a very early book, before she knew to write a book with depth.