The Dragon Girl’s Ascension (Volume 2)

By: invayne _

Narrated by: Virtual Voice

Desaray, a normal 14 year old girl, living a normal life.

Her everyday life suddenly changed when the world as she knew it ceased to exist.

Her world, but not her world.

Monsters appearing out of nowhere.

90% of the population disappeared.

An apocalypse like none other.

A system gained from killing a single monster.

Once human, now a dragon...

All of these things happening all at the same time, turning Desaray's world upside down.

How will she cope in this new world, not as a human but as a dragon?

virtual ish

But it's not too threatening to touch. this voice kinda get lost a little not as lively... And it kind of takes away from the actual narrators that do this. I mean, they do a much better job. The book was okay. I didn't think it was that great...

works

it would be great if the books were a pack, that way it would be cohesive.

Bad Virtual Voice

Using AI (Virtual Voice) as a narrator ruined the telling of this story. Firstly, where the author has a character stuttering, the AI is saying the individual letters in the stutter until it gets to an actual word. Second, when the author is indicating a pause by using an ellipse, the AI is skipping over the ellipse without pausing. Lastly, the AI's reading of the story is without the emotional input that a human narrator would include (good or bad).

It got worse...

Ok... listened to the 2nd installment of the story. OMG how painful. The author definitely has not listened to their own work.Either that or they're clueless about so much, as well as being a non-native to the English language, that they don't recognize how the AI is butchering what is already a poorly constructed piece of (and it pains me to call it this...) "work". If you perused the first book and thought the author might redress some of the glaring errors the 2nd time around. Abandon all hope. It only gets worse. Not worth the listening time at all. Even if it's free...sheesh...