The Honeymoon Surprise

Transgender Erotica

By: Phoebe Pearl

Narrated by: Virtual Voice

Howie is on the verge of marrying Abbey, the girl of his dreams. But, he’s got some concerns about her past. Abbey’s hiding something, but neither the family attorney, Josh, nor Howie knows how big the surprise is. Abbey refuses to have sex with Howie until there married. So, Howie waited, thinking it was virtuous.
Howie waited patiently because he loved Abbey and enjoyed her friendship. It was a long wait, but that wait was finally over. Now, in a secluded beachfront cottage, Howie gets down to business.

On their first night alone, Howie discovers the one thing Abbey forgot to mention, and Abbey has a big honeymoon surprise for him. It’s something other girls don’t have—and it’s much bigger than the one Howie has between his legs.

He can’t divorce her: Divorce would require the family attorney to cease paying his trust fund stipend and after Abbey raises more money than Howie for his run for mayor and his non-profit. Abbey demands sex, and in ways Howie never imagined. Howie submits to her kinky desires because he does love her, and other than the surprise between her legs, she is the perfect wife,

Funny

Man I couldn’t stop laughing awaiting the big reveal!!! Priceless! The pain and despair was like sweet music!

That the wife would eventually dominate the sexual relationship.

I would like the female to verbally demand more aggressively. This is such a turn on!

Was this written by AI?

Bad writing aside, the basic premise is workable, however a half hour into the story, the reader/listener gets one minute of information, very little character development and giant plot holes. Generally a good story is a common person in an uncommon situation. This was common people acting like no one ever in a slightly out of the ordinary situation. Honestly if a story takes 45 minutes to get to the steamy parts, there had better be a good story to carry it.
Why did the lawyer and the bride wait until the night before the wedding to talk about anything?
Why would she think his lawyer would not do a background check without the groom’s approval?
Why not be honest? Lying is traditionally considered a trait of a baddy.
Why not get annulled? No court or judge would consider that divorce and no legal arrangement with the father’s estate would adversely affected.
Why is every single character both clueless and an inconsiderate asshole?