The Last Praetorian

By: Mike Smith

Narrated by: David Benjamin Bliss

Commander Jonathan Radec is a man desperately trying to escape from the mistakes of his past. Now the owner of Vanguard Shipping, his primary concerns are trying to keep his ships flying and his crew alive. However, the shadowy Syndicate organization has set their sights on the commander and his business, having sent a beautiful assassin to kill him. To make matters worse, she's become the target of his infatuation, much to the dismay of his ex-girlfriend. Recently elevated to president of the Confederation, she's still very much in love with him and capable of making his life a living hell.

Surrounded by a galaxy beginning to tear itself apart, with enemies on all sides, he's now also unwillingly tasked with trying to save the Confederation - for which he has little regard. Jon has little going in his favor, except a crew consisting of the elite of the old Imperial Navy, all of whom would fight to the death for him, and a past that possibly makes him one of the most dangerous men alive.

©2013 Mike Smith (P)2015 Audible, Inc.

Good but too much sexuality

Entertaining story. talented narrator. But god, the amount of horny bullshit in this book is like it was written by a particularly talented high school kid. Characters are constantly staring at each other's asses. God, we get it, his eyes linger on her smooth skin and blah blah blah

Passable, but needs work

If you could sum up The Last Praetorian in three words, what would they be?

Decent story marred by sub-par reading and very poor copy editing,

What was one of the most memorable moments of The Last Praetorian?

None come to mind.

What three words best describe David Benjamin Bliss’s voice?

Juvenile-sounding inexperienced reader

Was this a book you wanted to listen to all in one sitting?

No.

Any additional comments?

The book has a good premise and decent characterization, which makes it worth listening to. However, it is marred by a poor reader whose inflections, emphasis, and sarcasm are juvenile-sounding. In addition, this book was apparently not copy-edited as there are a number of glaring syntax errors. There is, for example, no such word as "orientate," yet the author persists in using it. Sloppy work all around. I am about to purchase and listen to the next story in the series. Hopefully, these rookie errors have been corrected.

Mr. Bliss' performance is the saving grace for TLP

Had David Benjamin Bliss not done such a great job of making this very predictable story engaging, I would have stopped listening within the first few hours. The story is totally devoid of originality, though that alone would not have turned me off. It also, has so many clichés and inconsistencies, not to mention the glaring changes in personality the main character displays throughout the story, makes it difficult to listen until the end. It was only DBB's characterizations that got me through. Also, all the characters in the book seemed to be of the European variety and only humanoid (not to mention being very male oriented, there is a grand total of three female characters, four if you count the second-in-command's wife who is, although referred to on several occasions, never seen). Now, I am not advocating for alien species or all female navy contingents, it's just that I am not sure how this can happen in such a vast empire. Somewhere there must be many more women and people of color. And I doubt that they would be completely like us. I also take issue with Commander Jonathan Radec’s (the main protagonist) superhuman status. I mean really, he can't out smart everyone and win every battle, it gets boring after a while. And OMG, if you mention one more time that Radec is tall, blond, handsome, strong cheekbones, an amazing physical appearance, and on top of that dressed in his crisp white navy uniform, I think I will scream. He is (literally) the White Knight of the story, ok, we got it Mr. Disney. The story, as a whole, is predictable, but that won’t stop me from listening to the next two in the series, I just hope that the author (Mike Smith) ups his game.

excellent

Very enjoyable. Easy for me to relate to the characters. Unique in a very comfortable way.

enjoyable start

l have enjoyed listening to the first book of this series, and look forward to listening to the remaining books.