The Legendary Overlord

A Slice of Life Harem Adventure Book 1

By: S. Foster

Narrated by: Virtual Voice

Amon's behavior changed when he unlocked his unique "Fury" genetics at the age of 5.

After living with his grandparents for 11 years, he learned to behave properly.

However, his grandparents faked their deaths and he had to move in with his mother, stepfather, and non-biological twin sisters, and attend a new school, presenting a new challenge for him.

Warning: If you don't like a harem and R-18 chapters this novel is not for you.

Was interesting

This was an interesting take on some future world it is written in something of a jump around style which did require a back track or two just to ensure understanding

interesting

story well written. character building good. world development fun. waiting for the next part of the story.

Punctuation is for wimps

Story is here, hidden behind overly simplistic wording and a robot overlord that skips periods. The plot is hard to follow because sentences blend together. The work needs a few more edits. There are too many repeated items, odd word choices and a grammar error here and there.

would not recommend

very confusing storyline. characters are all over the place. no structure. needs back story on events