You Can't Ruin Christmas

Snowflake Creek, Book 1

By: Olivia Noble

Narrated by: Samantha Archer

Have you ever been dumped right before the holidays? It sucks.

Luckily, my handsome hockey player roommate steps in with a plan. He's going to volunteer his services as my personal trainer, so that I can get a revenge body and make my ex regret leaving me. But during our long, sweaty sessions at the gym, I find myself becoming more and more attracted to Sven.

His muscles are enough to make any girl swoon. He is sweet and caring with a panty-melting smile.

Did I mention he's my ex's brother?

Ignoring that, Sven might manage to save my Christmas from being an utter disaster, after all.

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Cute Read

I really enjoyed listening to Sven who is a former soccer player turned personal trainer after an injury. Mary is an aspiring actress doing voice overs and audiobooks. Sven who is a twin and his brother is Sebastian a hockey player. Mary and Sven are roommates, odd combination since Mary was dating Sebastian Sven’s brother. Sebastian and Mary were in a relationship and he broke her heart. Sven agrees to be Mary personal trainer in hopes of Mary winning back Sebastian. In the process Mary and Sven develop feelings for each other.

How will Sebastian feel when he finds out that his brother Sven and Mary are in a relationship, did Mary’s revengeful tact work for or against her in getting Sebastian back, could Mary and Sven have been secretly crushing on each other, is there an HEA in store for Mary a Sven.

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WHAT THE...???

FIRST i WAS LOOKING FOR LGTBQ+ STORIES. AM SO SICK AND TIRED OF HETERO BEING MIXED IN WIT GAY WHEN IT COMES TO MOVIES AND AUDIO BOOKS. THE STORY WAS OKAY BUT WHEN THE NARRATOR DOING MALE VOICES NEEDS MORE PRACTICE. COMES OFF TOO SLOW ALMOST LIKE BRAIN IMPARED / ROBOTIC EITHER THAN THAT GOOD STORY.

AND WITH THE LGGGBTQ+ DOESN'T HAVE TO HAVE A LOT OF SEX SCENES TO BE GOOD EITHER IF HAS A STRONG BACK BONE TO THE PLOT / STORY YOU CAN GET AWAY WITH VERY LITTLE IN DISCRIPTIVENESS IN THE SEX SCENES PREFER MORE POSSITIVE GAY ROLE MODLES STRONG STORY-LINES ESPECIALLY FOR KIDS COMING TO TERMS TO OR ABOUT SEX.

Twin brothers

The story was a bit slow paced and predictable, but still sweet. Mary is dumped by her boyfriend right before Christmas, the twin brother offers her comfort, becoming her new boyfriend.
The narrator speech was spaced and did not flow naturally. That was the biggest negative for me. It kept me from getting into the story.

You Can't Ruin Christmas

You Can't Ruin Christmas
Book 1 of Snowflake Creek
Olivia Noble

It is a good book with good characters, Sven and Mary, that have chemistry. I just felt like the book was told and not really felt. The narration is okay but I really didn't like the voice when Sven spoke.

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Entertaining

While I found this book to be entertaining, I did not like the main characters at all no matter how much I tried. The narrator did a great job of bringing the story to life.

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