Family Squabbles

Chronicles of Zoey Grimm, Book 1

My brother is taking over the family business . . .

It was something I'd trained for my entire life. I was more suited for it than he was in almost every way.

Except for the most important one . . . the ability he'd inherited from our father. Why wasn't I born with the same powers?

I'm leaving the underworld. I don't belong there anymore. Of course, I only have one marketable skill:

Kicking ass and taking names.

How can I use that to start a new life for myself on Earth?

Unfortunately, vigilantism doesn't pay the bills.

©2022 LMBPN® Publishing (P)2023 Tantor

Better than other collaborations

I’ve read other collaborations by at least one of the other writers but found myself less satisfied with the story, the timing just in general. This book one however appealed in story, how long suspense took from action to resolution and the feeling a whole story actually happened with an interest in the next book but not dissatisfaction with too much cliff hanger. This is the reason I submit a written as well as star review

A little too crude for me

When the MC started talking about "Dicking and Dashing" when referring to her just wanting to have sex and then putting down her partner even though she says he was "a catch" then I stopped listening. It made me dislike the character because she sounded crude and hateful towards others. You're supposed to like the MC but her behavior instantly turned me against her. That was when I knew I was done with the book and didn't want to waste my time on the rest of it.