Desire: A LitRPG Adventure

Book 2

By: Cameron Milan

Narrated by: John Downey

Ace and Vincent spent day and night in the challenges, growing stronger at a breakneck speed. Through their crazy training and lucky encounters, they have grown so strong that they stand above all others. The world watches their every move, and their actions shake the world.

Through Ace's desire to help others grow stronger so that they may protect themselves, Northrock city was born. Northrock is famed for its numerous experts, and, as a result, users from all over the world travel to live there. It is widely regarded as the safest place on Earth.

Two years have passed since the arrival of the tattoo, and after the numerous dungeons were wiped out, the world has grown peaceful once again. The future looks optimistic, and the possibilities are endless.....

However, unbeknownst to the world, a powerful user has arrived from afar, threatening to destroy everything.

This novel is the second book of the Desire: A LitRPG Adventure series.

©2018 Cameron Milan (P)2018 Cameron Milan

Please kill off Ace

Dear Author: Please kill Ace. He's so lame, boring goody two shoes that's only purpose is to hold back Demon. He sucks, get rid of that worthless leash.

very good but Too shore,

does a great job of changing or introducing new stuff to keep the story fresh. There are certain spots will you feel the story cannot evolve From here. the writer finds a way to add new features and stuff you don't think about.

my scores require a review

the scores in reverse:
story- it is an enjoyable story with many irritations. the fight scenes were... cartoonish(?) basically a guy charges up an attack and the other takes then he does it again. it felt turn based but one side kept picking defend. I think it improves towards the end though or I got used to it. also some things that only required minimum thought caught them completely off guard. I could have forgiven being surprised due to miscalculation.

performance- I had a difficult time starting this book due to the way the guy reads... I was able to get used to it eventually but then there were audio issues where there was background noise and sudden volume shifts between sentences. it might not be as bad as 2 stars possibly but it bothered me much more than the story issues.

overall- now one might wonder why the overall score would be higher than all the other scores. basically I will still be getting the next book which automatically guarantees a score of 4 or higher. if I was unsure it would be a 3.

Another awesome book

I love the way the author isn't afraid to skip the middle stuff. I don't need to hear a year of training, just need to know how much stronger they got. Middle stuff is boring.

So good

It's so awesome I kinda want to listen to it again right now. narrator does an awesome job and the book has awesome characters