Locked in Limbo 1

A LitRPG Dark Fantasy

By: Nicholas Steam

Narrated by: Virtual Voice

Damien Mitchell awakens in a fantasy world, with no idea of how or why. It turns out he’s in a lifelike video game, which would be great! Except he’s a peon.

Seems the powers-that-be are messing with his destiny, and the best way to bring him down is to throw him into the quarry, where he’s to spend his days mining – at least until the mysterious race, the Seraphyt, comes along. And they've been waiting a long time to get their hands on him.

If Damien wants to discover his destiny, he’s got to overthrow and conquer the village Nythera with the only help he can get – other peons.

But as he delves deeper into this dark and dangerous world, he discovers that the stakes are higher than he ever imagined. Will he be able to claim his destiny, or will he be forever locked in Limbo?

Locked in Limbo is a LitRPG Haremlit Dark Fantasy with town builder gamelit elements.

This was a free listen with an AI generated audio recording.

I didn’t get drawn into the story as much as I usually do. One thing that I am willing to do is to pay to have talented people read my stories!

So the ai narrator wasn’t great

I think the story is pretty good but the narrator didn’t give much emotion because it is a machine and it is painful to listen to the the story when it’s spoken as if it where an essay or a lecture

Great story

The story was great and the characters somewhat interesting, my only real complaints are that the virtual voice took so many extended pauses that I kept thinking the app closed or something.

intresting

it was pretty well written as far as litrpg goes. it almost reminds me of a city builder game for the phone or PC. the story is worth a listen, the sex isn't over dramatic, the fights are good. so far I like it.

there are moments where the narrator pauses, but that's probably the ai narration.

again virtual voice ruins it

so first off virtual voice, you are getting a free voice actor and getting what you pay for. This one didn't sound bored at least. Miss pronunciations, wierd pauses, and fade outs at the begining and ending of sentences. The story was probably a decent read, and I I have a chance will probably get to it. There are a few places that should have been emotional, and either the writing or the reader just couldn't convey it.