Mrs Collins, Against Her Wishes

By: Melanie Schertz, a Lady

Narrated by: Virtual Voice

A Pride and Prejudice what if story. With the departure of the Netherfield party to London, the Bennet family's hopes of a marriage between Jane and Mr Bingley are dashed. Due to declining health, and wishing to protect his family, Mr Bennet insists on Elizabeth marrying his cousin, Mr Collins. On the way from the wedding breakfast to Hunsford, a terrible carriage accident befalls the newlyweds. Mr Darcy receives a letter from his aunt, pleading for his assistance, as her clergyman is dead and his wife is terribly injured. What will Darcy's reaction be to finding the young lady he cannot forget, in the cottage at Hunsford?

Virtual Voice horrible

The story was good but have a virtual voice narration distracts from the story. Virtual voice should not be used

Horrible narration

I don’t expect much from virtual voice narration, but this was horrible with repeated words and phrases and stuttering throughout.
Story was good though

Needs editing

The chapters are messed up and some grammar errors need addressing. Otherwise the story is good. Would be better if narrated by a human!

Outstanding

One of the best P&P vagaries I have read. I would love for a voice actor to read it as it’s very well written and different from the other hundreds I have read in this genre. I loved it. It was nice to see those who deserved reproof got it and from the characters you wouldn’t suspect. Great work! I look forward to other books by this author.

Title was perfect

I enjoyed the flow of the story. However the reader kept hesitating. Overall I enjoyed it very much.