The Ashes of Longbourn

By: Melanie Schertz, a Lady

Narrated by: Virtual Voice

A Pride and Prejudice variation. Elizabeth Bennet and Fitzwilliam Darcy came to an understanding while she was visiting her best friend at Hunsford. But then Darcy must rush to Scotland to be with his ill sister and a tragedy strikes at Elizabeth's family home of Longbourn. Darcy is told that his beloved died, devastating the Master of Pemberley. While Darcy is trying to put his life back together, Elizabeth is attempting to survive the injuries she suffered. Can they find each other and happiness?

Poor Elizabeth

I don't like for Elizabeth to be so terribly injured and feeling so abandoned. The story was pretty good but I was not particularly enthralled.

The Most Beautiful Story

A “Variation” that brings the joining of the -2-,to a full life of our imagination & images. Great joy & sadness of their Love & what they do w/ it. Best of so very many renditions taking us all the way thru their marriage. The AI simply dissolves into background & written word prevails…Enjoy!

A heartbreaking love story.

This story is heartbreaking but overcomes life’s difficulties and challenges with the power of love. This is not a retelling but goes down a dark path with many obstacles put in the way of true love. I loved the story in print and enjoyed listening to it.