A Debt to Be Paid

A Pride and Prejudice Variation (Darcy and Elizabeth Variations)

By: MJ Stratton

Narrated by: Harry Frost

At fifteen, Elizabeth Bennet is intelligent, perceptive, and doted upon by her father. Life in Hertfordshire is peaceful—until the arrival of Mr. Damian Fiennes, the new master of Netherfield Park. Though outwardly charming, something about him unsettles Elizabeth. She does her utmost to avoid him, yet the spirited young girl captivates Mr. Fiennes, and he is determined to possess her. When a series of manipulations ensnares both Elizabeth and Mr. Bennet, father and daughter find themselves trapped in a perilous situation—and with only one means of preserving their family’s good name, Elizabeth must marry the very man she mistrusts. With no other option, she consents, sacrificing her freedom to safeguard her family's honor.

Disillusioned by the shallow flirtations of London society, Darcy encounters a remarkable young woman unlike any he has known—intelligent, graceful—and married. Mrs. Elizabeth Fiennes captivates him at once. Warned away by his cousin, who has heard dark tales of the lady's husband, Darcy does not see her for some time. When fate reunites them, both are grieving in their own way, and a quiet, powerful bond begins to form. Elizabeth is now a widow, and Darcy sees happiness in his grasp.

Yet as swiftly as his feelings deepen, she vanishes. Their paths cross once more when Darcy arrives in Hertfordshire with Mr Bingley. Haunted still by the shadows of her past, Elizabeth guards her heart. Determined not to lose her again, Darcy sets out to win it—but freeing her from the ghosts of all she has endured may be the greatest challenge he has ever faced.

A Debt to be Paid is a medium-angst, forced-marriage Pride and Prejudice variation.

Note: Non-graphic instances of narcissistic manipulation and abuse are present in this book.

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Narcissist takes advantage

4 1/2 stars rounded up

This variation (and fantastically narrated by Harry Frost) starts prior to canon. A very manipulative narcissist money lender takes possession of Netherfield Park. This puts him into a position to further his goals. One goal is he now wants a 15 year old Elizabeth for his wife. His plan takes time to develop thus leaving Mr Bennet and Elizabeth no choice but to accept his terms.

The emotional impact hits both Mr Bennet and Elizabeth hard and is something they both will have to process through for years to come. Elizabeth with the help of a new friend learns how to cope with this verbally abusive man she is married to. Darcy comes and goes through her life several times over the years until she’s in a position where she is healed enough to be herself again. Darcy is absolutely in love with Elizabeth but doesn’t know what she’s afraid of until later, this information cements that she is the only one who will ever be his wife. I think that Elizabeth’s daughter was a wonderful character to bring people together. I can see myself reading/listening to this again.

Great story of resilience & new beginnings

MJ Stratton has solidified her place as one of my favorite authors. Despite my hesitation because of the narcissistic antagonists, this book was incredible. The journey through the pain of manipulation and abuse was therapeutic & the listener is ultimately rewarded with a well deserved HEA.