The Alpha's Mail Order Mate

A Paranormal Shifter Romance

By: Jade White

Narrated by: Jigisha Patel

James Nightsky knows his wolf pack are in trouble. Big trouble.

Their numbers are dwindling, and the future is looking bleak. As he is alpha, it is his responsibility to ensure not only the safety of the pack but also their security for the future. This includes finding a mate and raising a healthy cub.

James hates doing it, but he knows he has no choice.

He writes a letter to his old alpha, asking for help. He hopes his old alpha might be able to spare some numbers from his own thriving pack.

Luckily he is right.

James cannot believe it when he lays his eyes on Chastity Fayre. To him, she is beautiful and just the type of mate he is looking for. But how will Chastity cope with being The Alpha's Mail Order Mate? And was she really sent to him as a goodwill gift, or is there more to this than meets the eye?

©2015 Jade White (P)2015 Jade White

Story Suffers from the Performer's Difficulties

What disappointed you about The Alpha's Mail Order Mate?

I think have no idea whether the story was any good or not. The point of any story is to try to suspend disbelief and enjoy the story that unfolds. The person reading The Alpha's Mail Order Mate was terrible. I could not stand to listen to the end of the first chapter. I don't understand why the story was released in this condition. I think this is one book it is better to read than to listen to this performer.

What didn’t you like about Jigisha Patel’s performance?

The performance was very poor, certainly not up to the standard one comes to expect from an Audible performers. The rhythm of the reading was totally off. I would give this performer a minus 10 for this effort. This is one I would be happy to get my money back and find time to read the story myself.

Odd performance

Unfortunately, the performer’s phrasing and intonations were unnatural and distracting, so much so that i lost interest in following the story.

Not my narrative style

The story was pretty good and kept moving along but I really struggled with the narrative. It felt stilted and like there wasn’t a natural flow to her words. It took awhile to get through the book because of it.

Narrator's performance severely disappointing

I purchased this story in spite of the bad reviews regarding the narrator, thinking it can't possibly be all that bad. To be honest, it was worse. I stuck with listening through to the end of the story because I wanted to know the ending...even though as I listened I wanted to fast forward past the parts where the narrator chose to speak in a very, very slow, long and drawn out voice for several of the characters. I guess she didn't know how to alter her tonal frequency and had to resort to making her narration sound as if the characters didn't know how to talk or form words to make a sentence. She read each word with a very long pause between each word. No one talks that way unless perhaps they've suffered some sort of brain injury and had to search their brain to find the words needed to express themselves...of which the story line did not suggest that that had happened.

One thing for sure, I know I won't buy any other audible books or CDS where this lady is the narrator!! So other potential buyers, please take heed and believe everyone's negative review about this as as truly true.

Please save your money and just buy the BOOK to read... Listening to it will drive you crazy!!

Mail order mate

This is a good book and I enjoyed it , I have listen on audible and has read it. Each time I find it enjoyable and intriguing . I liked each and everyone of the characters and how they interacted with each other. I am glad Katie Dawson got her comeuppance.