Untouchable

By: Shon

Narrated by: Ja'Air Bush, Midnite Michael

I met the love of my life when I was ten years old.

Ever since Talulla Evans walked up to me with her gap-toothed smile and told me her name means "princess," I've been entranced.

For the last twenty years we've been there throughout each other's storms. And somewhere along the line I fell in love. Deep in love.

There is nothing I wouldn't do for her. Which is how I found myself caught up and agreeing to be her FWB, knowing I wanted more . . . needed more.

The problem is: Talulla isn't looking for more. And I get that. She's been burned more than once and isn't trying to repeat the cycle. But it's becoming harder to compartmentalize my feelings for her when all I want is everything when it comes to her.

Contains mature themes.

©2022 Shon (P)2024 Tantor

Sometimes the fairytale takes time

Overall good story… a part two could work, an unbothered woman as a mother and the insecurities that come with it

Nice storyline but...

I found it difficult to like the main female character, she was ridiculously selfish. Insecurities and fears of abandonment isnt permission to dismiss the feelings of somebody else, definitely not your best friend of 20yrs
I think the intent of the storyline was on point but the execution made it difficult to want a win for the main female character.

Pierre

Loved all of it, the back and fourth.. all tied in together and I felt every emotion that the characters put out

Good Story

This was my first time reading something by this author. I enjoyed the book and the narration. Tally got on my nerves.

I cant....

As hard as I tried, I just couldn't sympathize with the MFC. She was doing too much and I found myself wishing the MMC would move on with his life. This one just wasn't for me.