Accidental Incubus

Avalar Explored, Book 1

By: Deacon Frost

Narrated by: Joshua Story

Jace Blackbriar just wants to become a blacksmith and live a comfortable life in his village. His family never wanted him to become an adventurer...and he isn't going to break that promise.

Jace wants to learn to make goods that pay well so that he can support himself, and maybe even send some money to his family. His goal is to gain the blacksmith class and start his own forge. But then, one of the other apprentices decides he needs to be taught a lesson.

When a rare and valuable magic item is destroyed, Jace is left with a racial transformation and cast into the wilds without guidance. Now, he has to figure out how to survive in a kill-or-be-killed world as a monster race that most goodly folk will want dead.

Accidental Incubus contains explicit elements and some adult content.

©2021 Deacon Frost (P)2021 Podium Audio

the narrator is really bad

like holy shit this guy feels like he has no idea what his own mouth is! One that gets me bad is when he says Arr-CHArr-REE instead of archery like a normal human. Everything is delived slow and with an off rhythm cadence. It is mostly solved by turning up to 1.5-8 times speed.

credit where it is due. there are no lip noises or bad breathing into the mic problems.

Awesome!

Loved it! Grate mc cool system and and fun and engaging story! I can’t wait for book 2 to hit audible! Like literally can’t wait am going to kindle to read it now… :p

Decent but...

Decent story but the author fell victim to pretty much ever common mistake you can make in a litrpg. worst was repeating his characters stats. every so often is one thing but it was getting annoying and near the end he repeated them almost right on top of each other twice over at which point i fast forwarded several times. these little problems weren't a deal breaker, I'd like to hear the next one but it just got to the point of rubbing a little too much on my nerves. overall story was decent though and the sex scenes were well done both by the writer and narrator.

A Dark Story

- Harem based (makes sense, incubus and all)
- Decent amount of Adult Content (Not to much, not to little)
- Cliff Hanger ending.

I enjoyed the spin on what is classically in the classic tropes that haunt this type of story (at least from what I've seen). Being a jerk like I am I expected there to be a good lead up to the second book, something to hook readers in. Which book 2 is ALREADY out on Kindle, and if rumor on the Author's Facebook and other places is true, it will eventually be in Audio version very soon. Looking forward to the next installment.

Ok

The performance is a bit slow, and it's made worse by too much of the book being spent on stat sheets. More than an hour of this book is devoted to reading stat sheets. The plot is ok. The characters are ok. The author likes butt stuff. Fortunately you can play it faster and skip ahead when it gets too tedious.

Note to author: Please just tell us what has changed in the character sheet instead of detailing everything?