Hidden Apartment Fairies HaremLit Omnibus: A Contemporary Men's Adventure

By: Nick Nolace

Narrated by: Virtual Voice

I had one job: pass my classes to keep my scholarship. Now that four magical fairies have tumbled into my life, things are a bit more complicated. Not only do I have to get good grades, but I have to keep these fairies hidden from my roommate. This semester is going to be interesting...

So much wasted potential in this story

The premise of the story line was intriguing. This could have been so entertaining. But the result was quite the opposite. First, the virtual voice narrator was as expected, lacking personality. The story was so repetitive that it began to feel like wading through a muddy swamp. I almost feel like the story was written by AI. It feels that way so much. It was only 4hrs long. I made myself finish it thinking at least that the payoff would be waiting for me in the end. It was not. There was so much mismatch in scale that descriptions did not make sense. And again, the repetition.... Monotonous! I got to the point that I was counting down to the end so I could rinse my palate with a new book. Oh, and did I mention the constant repetition?

Pass...