Defiance of the Fall 6

Defiance of the Fall, Book 6

By: TheFirstDefier, JF Brink

Narrated by: Pavi Proczko

The Lich King Adriel is gone and Earth has avoided being drowned in deadly Miasma.

Yet an even greater dangers lurks in the dark, and Zac is running against the clock. The Great Redeemer bears down on their planet, guided by Void's Disciple and his children.

Everything points toward the mysterious base built by the Technocrats. That's where the Dominators are hiding, and even the remaining invaders have set their sights on the powerful treasure within.

And it might even be the key to solve the mystery of Zac's background.

Book 6 of the hit Defiance of the Fall LitRPG series. Grab your copy today!

About the Series: Jump into a story that merges Apocalyptic LitRPG elements with eastern cultivation. Class systems, skill systems, endless choices for progression, it has everything fans of the genre love. Explore a vast universe full of mystery, adventure, danger and even aliens; where even a random passer-by might hold the power of a god. Follow Zac as he struggles to stake out a unique path to power as a mortal in a world full of cultivators.

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Writing needs a better editor

I’ve thoroughly enjoyed this story so far, but the writing needs help. The constant use of words like “however”, make it seem like a good portion of the descriptions are afterthoughts with lazy fixes.

Great story and ideas, but poor writing and slow progression.

Narrator is fine, aside from the oft cringe-worthy demon voice (but you get used to it I guess). With danger of sounding too critical, as I have enjoyed the books so far, I will take a moment to gripe about the writing.

Writer has a lot of great ideas, and the world and story is interesting, but loses focus throughout the books, slowly shifting focus of writing (earlier was much more progression focused in concrete ways). It just feels like there is a serious lack of planning. It felt like very little of real substance happened in the book, and the story is taking baby steps. At this rate, there will be 100 books before the story is done (which means I’ll never get to read the end of the story because chances of writer burning out before story is over at this rate is high :( )

As for actually writing, someone get this writer a proper editor. Some of the turns of phrase like “look in the mouth of a gift horse”, in a single sentence, and incessant, lazy, or odd use of e.g “screamed danger”, “was shocked to X but soon i.e. understood” in a single sentence, or “by now”, or “spread out” (when there are so many options like permeated/inundated the area, exploded from the epicenter of, blasted from, etc..) could be worked through with good editor in my opinion. I get that it is from royal road and chapters are published at a high pace, editors cost money, etc., but it just has so much more potential!

Great story

What a great continuation of the series. Absolutely have enjoyed this series. Great story, no graphic sexual situations.

Each book is better than the last

This is easily one of the best Progression Fantasy (Cultivation) novels I have had the pleasure to experience. If you liked the previous book you will like this one more!

Great series

Got a bit monotonous but love this series and pavis narration every single time he does