Kinetic

Deathstalkers MC, Book 1

By: Elizabeth Knox, E. C. Land

Narrated by: Laurie West, Christian Black

Charlee: I knew the second I'd arrived back in Portland he'd know I was here within days, so it wasn't a shock to me that he came knocking on my door, literally. Kaden was my first love, but he isn't the same man anymore. These days he goes by another name, Kinetic, one he was given when he went overseas. Now he's in a biker club and living a totally different life. I came back here to take care of my elderly mother, but I didn't come alone. So much has changed over the last decade and as soon as I saw him, everything came rushing back. Will I be able to get out of Portland unscathed, or is Kinetic going to weasel his way into my heart like Kaden did?

Kinetic: Years ago, I enlisted in the Marines and thought my life was going just the way I planned. Had the girl and the career I always wanted. We were kids, just starting our lives and had so much to look forward to. I had it all figured out, but the kicker is it never happened. I've lived the last twelve years mainly overseas working alongside my brothers. Coming home we started the Deathstalkers MC and I never looked back. Now I'm standing on the front porch of Charlee's mom's house, glaring down at her as she holds onto the one thing she knew I always wanted. My kid. Decisions have to be made and something's going to give. Either way she'll be mine again.

Contains mature themes.

©2021 Elizabeth Knox and E.C. Land (P)2024 Tantor

Great story

This book was so good. It keep you interested from beginning to end. I definitely recommend .

Not Great

This story was amateur and not a lot to do with an MC except that the characters were part of one.

No

Nope, could not even finish it as it pissed me off the blatant way she went after the military. I am a military spouse and just the way that she went about this whole thing I could not it left such a bad taste in my mouth. Yeah she may not have personally attacked the military, but attacking or the way she handled the storyline for the military member I could not get behind. It pissed me off with the FMC.

Terrible

The book takes place mostly in the past then rushes through the main conflict in the present. The issues are not worked through in any way. Instead there is a near death experience and they are in love again. The funniest thing is they both acknowledge they were bad at communicating yet when they get back together there is no scene showing them working through their problems. The male main character is in an MC but it’s not a focal point so I can’t say this is an MC romance. The narrators did a great job with this trash work. Thankfully this was free. If I paid for this I’d be pissed.

Yikes😬

This was pretty bad. Timelines not matching up, weird time jumps and then non communication of the FMC and MMC, like not mentioning all 4 years you are dating you want to be in the military or that your dream is to move to NYC and have him follow. Seems way off. Just wow. The way the chapters were written it was almost like they took long writing breaks in between and got “inspiration” from other books bc they didn’t flow as if the same person was writing.